A good piece for your preliminary task - but - 1. Can you take the text off the filmed piece? 2. There is too much background noise, I can even here the dolly wheels on the film. 3. You should have cut the section of Gillian opening the classroom door shorter. In the next shot, you show her coming in the door. In the previous shot, she has already entered the room!
Can you evaluate this piece? If you do a re-edit, please keep the first film on the blog so that we can see that you have made improvements.
A good piece for your preliminary task - but -
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2. There is too much background noise, I can even here the dolly wheels on the film.
3. You should have cut the section of Gillian opening the classroom door shorter. In the next shot, you show her coming in the door. In the previous shot, she has already entered the room!
Can you evaluate this piece? If you do a re-edit, please keep the first film on the blog so that we can see that you have made improvements.